Thursday, 11 June 2009

THURSDAY 11th JUNE 2009.

Characters are running through the chronicle,
But they’re too loose;
The plot is not attached to them,
Not making sense.
They’re speaking words they’ve learned,
And it’s overt,
With no emotion visible,
And that’s unmissable.
A mark wishes
To be noticed
But is chipped
When hit,
And when asked how well are we
The question’s cursory
And leveled for effect
At others to detect,
And that seems all important
When observing our story.

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