Saturday 29 August 2009

SATURDAY 29th AUGUST 2009.

The texture foxed him as it
Was egg instead of the chicken
Soup he was expecting,
As it would us,
With our supposed knowledge;
A representation of intelligence,
A simulacrum,
Stumbled upon along
Our lives.

He’s got the time, and I have
The life to fill it with, the words
To give: for every collection
Of sentences
There is always a correct sequence,
And though its order may differ from
Reader to reader,
Its relevancy and
Potency won’t.

2 comments:

  1. A rare poetical flow! If your not careful you will miss it? I enjoyed reading this piece. The fox and the chicken(great metaphors) *smhs*

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  2. I looked up simulacrum, a great new word. I've read & passed it over, too lazy to break open a dictionary. I was connecting chicken with egg & didn't really think about the fox until I read JH_Poetry's comment. I'm inhaling this stuff & certain that I'm missing large chunks. Everything requires a 2nd & 3rd read. New things pop out every time. I find myself wondering who he is.

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