tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6219820097178412125.post511353527320859709..comments2023-10-29T09:38:46.485+00:00Comments on moongoole: MONDAY 9th FEBRUARY 2009.iangoolehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18295472586704307249noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6219820097178412125.post-13464761980402809082009-08-29T04:46:48.335+01:002009-08-29T04:46:48.335+01:00Okay, I guess you have reintroduced me to rhyme &a...Okay, I guess you have reintroduced me to rhyme & rhythm. This one seems to be something heard even though it's read in silence. It really seems to scream to be recorded. I love the way every stanza(?)ends. Effective/Selected. The damn thing is so smooth & silky.<br /> I kind of think you could grab some of these moments up with words & install them in the eternal museum, celebrate them, ceremonialize them,give them life etc. Well, maybe that's what you've done by writing about how they escape us. This one is sleek, a song.jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06452713585275936253noreply@blogger.com